This was very good. A 3.5 star story for me. Ms. McBride pulls me into her stories with her awesome characters. The sex in this is hot with the D/s. With the swordplay and the blood, it's all exciting for me.
This story seems like such a tiny taste of what could be larger. I want more. I want to learn what happens to the evil sorcerer. Will Arick and Sai bring it all down? How will they fight this evil bastard? A lovely little start of a tale which it's full tale told.