La Crimson Femme

Where is the rest of this story? Ms. Craven pens an erotic spank bank read, only to leave a reader wondering if this is the end. A reader may also wonder if there is a book prior to this one because it seems there is quite a bit of back history missing.

David and his stepsister Veronica do not get along. Based on the blurb and the opening scene, a reader may think David is only in his teens. When it turns out he is much older and runs a company, it is a bit jarring. The way David interacts with his mother is also strange. He comes across as a much younger man bending to his mother's will.

The plot of this story is not all there. There seems to be an unresolved conflict between the two step siblings. It's not clear exactly how they broke apart especially since it's revealed they used to be incestuously close. The different relationship between all the characters is messy and a bit all over the place. It is recommended for a tighter written story, to develop each character with clear connections between each of them. In addition, the characters need a bit more personality. It is also recommended to bring all the threads back together with a clear resolution for a conclusion. The way it's left, it feels as if there should be either a follow up book or the writer didn't know how to end it. The story just peters out. Lastly, because there seems to be more back history between the characters, to enrich the story, add more flashbacks to explain it.

Still, the sex in here is hawt! For those who enjoy Ffm and Mf, there is a little bit of everything. This is definitely good spank bank material. For those who enjoy being a voyeur, there are several delightful voyeuristic scenes. There is also a nicely written inappropriate boss abusing a secretary scene which adds to the heat. This story is not exactly port without a plot yet it's close. The sex in the story saves the book for me. Recommended to kinky readers who enjoy a bit of pseudo-incest.

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